Wednesday, November 11, 2009

mauros church bombing story




Wow that sound was terrible that sound sounded like lightning. I quickly thought that it was Byron doing one of his stupid stuff. I saw Byron peeking out of the window so it wasn't him that made that weird sound. Since the sound wasn't coming from Byron i knew something was up especially since i was seeing people looking around to check what was that weird sound. I quickly ran inside the house and into moms room momma told me that the church in which joetta was in had a bomb in it and the church exploded. I ran as fast as i could and while I was running i saw alot of people running towards the church. As soon as I got to the church i couldn't believe what my eyes saw. The church was covered in dust and i went inside because i wanted to save the ife of my sister joetta. When i got in the church it was all covered in dust and i saw joettas buster browns shiny black shoes which was under a rock. I ran to were the shiny black shoe was and the wool pooh which was a sign of death kept on pulling the shoe also and the shoe riped in half. I got the riped part and ran home. As i ran home i felt like if i wasn't myself , a whole group of people was surounding me this meant that joetta was dead. When i got home i just layed down on my bed and didnt think about anything. Joetta i guess came to say her final words to me. I didnt want to look at her face which of course looked like that ugly wool poohs face. Joetta was telling me stuff that i never imagined that she would tell me. She told me "Kenny why are you acting like this." I ignored her. I faced my fear and i looked at her face. It was normal and i didnt figure out what was it that happen. Joetta told me "why are you acting like this Kenny I'm going to tell momma if you don't stop." I told her that nothing happened that i had a headache. It took me a while to figure out all of this weird stuff but all i know is that i faced my fear.

2 comments:

  1. your writing is very unique and you have describe the cheuch bombing very well and detailed. continue doing your woork and make sure you pass this year... but other wise i think you did very well

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  2. Completion= 40/40
    Spelling= 8/10
    Creativity= 30/30
    Pictures= 10/10
    Map= 10/10

    Total= 98

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