Tuesday, November 10, 2009
Joetta Watsons; Nia Booker
Hi, my name is Joetta Watson. I live in Flint, Michigan. I live with my two brothers and my parents. My oldest brother name is Byron Watson, he think he is cool and bad but he is really not. His best friend name is Buphead, Buphead tells him to do things that he is not allow to do. I cry when Byron get in troblem. Kenny is my other brother and he has a lazy eye. People tease him because he is different, I dont understand why but when i get his age I would. One day Byron came home and his was different, i really didnt realize until I heard momma and Kenny say something so then i went over to where Momma and Kenny was at and then I saw Byron new look. His hair was straight so Momma was so upset that she told Byron to go to his room then all of a sudden Momma told Byron to come out. So he did and then Momma surprise she was going to burn Byron fingers, since I came moving Momma hands she didnt get a chance to so we waited for Papa to come home. Daddy came home went to the bathroom with Byron and shave Byron hair off. So after that case, my father and my mothre thought since Byron didnt get it here and do well here, they was going to send him to Alabama. So we have took a trip down there, so to make this story short, when we down there and there was some kind of accident and Kenny was acting a little wired but I really didnt because I was going to tell mommma anyway. That my part of view.
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